Comments on: How Do You Take Yourself Apart? http://htmlgiant.com/contests/how-do-you-take-yourself-apart/ the internet literature magazine blog of the future Thu, 24 May 2012 04:23:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Richard http://htmlgiant.com/contests/how-do-you-take-yourself-apart/comment-page-2/#comment-50991 Richard Fri, 22 Jan 2010 20:35:18 +0000 http://htmlgiant.com/?p=24399#comment-50991 damn damn

]]> By: Richard http://htmlgiant.com/contests/how-do-you-take-yourself-apart/comment-page-2/#comment-135868 Richard Fri, 22 Jan 2010 20:35:00 +0000 http://htmlgiant.com/?p=24399#comment-135868 damn damn

]]> By: PANK Blog / HTMLGIANT Readers Take Themselves Apart http://htmlgiant.com/contests/how-do-you-take-yourself-apart/comment-page-2/#comment-50969 PANK Blog / HTMLGIANT Readers Take Themselves Apart Fri, 22 Jan 2010 19:29:21 +0000 http://htmlgiant.com/?p=24399#comment-50969 [...] How you ask? We pick our favorites, in order of their appearance: [...] [...] How you ask? We pick our favorites, in order of their appearance: [...]

]]> By: MoGa http://htmlgiant.com/contests/how-do-you-take-yourself-apart/comment-page-2/#comment-50566 MoGa Thu, 21 Jan 2010 18:32:13 +0000 http://htmlgiant.com/?p=24399#comment-50566 Reborn, brothers, you burn, turn toward trying to forget, to feel again: a gone gift you hadn't built wasn't thought up: your sisters, cartons, a kinship, your possible past: you’ve missed, remember, their makeshift moment: time them; film time; fall, crash, directly into fact; ask, caladrius; look, milk your last sun myth: eyes looking up, caladrius, past your curse, you've thought out heat, you've noticed: others saw their push away: layer water over outer strength: periscope: fly away feeling: feel: fall: follow into kinship: push past the last brief having; even nest in that new cut sun then plummet up: remember and tuck, cleansed, into ascent, weak eagle. Reborn, brothers, you burn, turn toward trying to forget, to feel again: a gone gift you hadn’t built wasn’t thought up: your sisters, cartons, a kinship, your possible past: you’ve missed, remember, their makeshift moment: time them; film time; fall, crash, directly into fact; ask, caladrius; look, milk your last sun myth: eyes looking up, caladrius, past your curse, you’ve thought out heat, you’ve noticed: others saw their push away: layer water over outer strength: periscope: fly away feeling: feel: fall: follow into kinship: push past the last brief having; even nest in that new cut sun then plummet up: remember and tuck, cleansed, into ascent, weak eagle.

]]> By: MoGa http://htmlgiant.com/contests/how-do-you-take-yourself-apart/comment-page-2/#comment-135867 MoGa Thu, 21 Jan 2010 18:32:00 +0000 http://htmlgiant.com/?p=24399#comment-135867 Reborn, brothers, you burn, turn toward trying to forget, to feel again: a gone gift you hadn't built wasn't thought up: your sisters, cartons, a kinship, your possible past: you’ve missed, remember, their makeshift moment: time them; film time; fall, crash, directly into fact; ask, caladrius; look, milk your last sun myth: eyes looking up, caladrius, past your curse, you've thought out heat, you've noticed: others saw their push away: layer water over outer strength: periscope: fly away feeling: feel: fall: follow into kinship: push past the last brief having; even nest in that new cut sun then plummet up: remember and tuck, cleansed, into ascent, weak eagle. Reborn, brothers, you burn, turn toward trying to forget, to feel again: a gone gift you hadn’t built wasn’t thought up: your sisters, cartons, a kinship, your possible past: you’ve missed, remember, their makeshift moment: time them; film time; fall, crash, directly into fact; ask, caladrius; look, milk your last sun myth: eyes looking up, caladrius, past your curse, you’ve thought out heat, you’ve noticed: others saw their push away: layer water over outer strength: periscope: fly away feeling: feel: fall: follow into kinship: push past the last brief having; even nest in that new cut sun then plummet up: remember and tuck, cleansed, into ascent, weak eagle.

]]> By: Eric Anderson http://htmlgiant.com/contests/how-do-you-take-yourself-apart/comment-page-2/#comment-50459 Eric Anderson Thu, 21 Jan 2010 15:52:19 +0000 http://htmlgiant.com/?p=24399#comment-50459 I take myself apart to practice the art of meat origami. I have the guts to say, this swan is made of me. Look, a horseshoe crab. A President Lincoln. It takes patience to present ourselves as denervated. If you can wait, I’ll let you take home the butcher paper. I take myself apart to practice the art of meat origami. I have the guts to say, this swan is made of me. Look, a horseshoe crab. A President Lincoln. It takes patience to present ourselves as denervated. If you can wait, I’ll let you take home the butcher paper.

]]> By: Eric Anderson http://htmlgiant.com/contests/how-do-you-take-yourself-apart/comment-page-2/#comment-135866 Eric Anderson Thu, 21 Jan 2010 15:52:00 +0000 http://htmlgiant.com/?p=24399#comment-135866 I take myself apart to practice the art of meat origami. I have the guts to say, this swan is made of me. Look, a horseshoe crab. A President Lincoln. It takes patience to present ourselves as denervated. If you can wait, I’ll let you take home the butcher paper. I take myself apart to practice the art of meat origami. I have the guts to say, this swan is made of me. Look, a horseshoe crab. A President Lincoln. It takes patience to present ourselves as denervated. If you can wait, I’ll let you take home the butcher paper.

]]> By: Vi Khi Nao http://htmlgiant.com/contests/how-do-you-take-yourself-apart/comment-page-2/#comment-50420 Vi Khi Nao Thu, 21 Jan 2010 06:15:00 +0000 http://htmlgiant.com/?p=24399#comment-50420 with a hammer. i put myself on a wood stove. stretch my fingers. stretch my back. stretch my toes. i reach over the knob. turn it off. i reach out to the cutting board. i place myself on the cutting board. i slant myself on the cutting board. i lift the hammer. i lift it high. as high as my eyebrows. i lift my skirt up. i lift my skirt up with the other unused hand. i lift it up for the view. i lift the skirt. i lift the hammer. the hammer falls... i change my mind: correction. with a hatchet. i take myself apart with a hatchet. i put myself on the wood stove.... with a hammer.

i put myself on a wood stove. stretch my fingers. stretch my back. stretch my toes. i reach over the knob. turn it off. i reach out to the cutting board. i place myself on the cutting board. i slant myself on the cutting board. i lift the hammer. i lift it high. as high as my eyebrows. i lift my skirt up. i lift my skirt up with the other unused hand. i lift it up for the view. i lift the skirt. i lift the hammer. the hammer falls…

i change my mind: correction.

with a hatchet.
i take myself apart with a hatchet.

i put myself on the wood stove….

]]> By: Vi Khi Nao http://htmlgiant.com/contests/how-do-you-take-yourself-apart/comment-page-2/#comment-135865 Vi Khi Nao Thu, 21 Jan 2010 06:15:00 +0000 http://htmlgiant.com/?p=24399#comment-135865 with a hammer. i put myself on a wood stove. stretch my fingers. stretch my back. stretch my toes. i reach over the knob. turn it off. i reach out to the cutting board. i place myself on the cutting board. i slant myself on the cutting board. i lift the hammer. i lift it high. as high as my eyebrows. i lift my skirt up. i lift my skirt up with the other unused hand. i lift it up for the view. i lift the skirt. i lift the hammer. the hammer falls... i change my mind: correction. with a hatchet. i take myself apart with a hatchet. i put myself on the wood stove.... with a hammer.

i put myself on a wood stove. stretch my fingers. stretch my back. stretch my toes. i reach over the knob. turn it off. i reach out to the cutting board. i place myself on the cutting board. i slant myself on the cutting board. i lift the hammer. i lift it high. as high as my eyebrows. i lift my skirt up. i lift my skirt up with the other unused hand. i lift it up for the view. i lift the skirt. i lift the hammer. the hammer falls…

i change my mind: correction.

with a hatchet.
i take myself apart with a hatchet.

i put myself on the wood stove….

]]> By: jereme http://htmlgiant.com/contests/how-do-you-take-yourself-apart/comment-page-2/#comment-50400 jereme Thu, 21 Jan 2010 02:31:36 +0000 http://htmlgiant.com/?p=24399#comment-50400 "his book" being aaron burch's book of discussion. “his book” being aaron burch’s book of discussion.

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