Is this a good poem?

Posted by @ 11:50 am on November 6th, 2009

processLast night in class we did some process writing. I don’t like process writing, especially when it’s rule-based. I always wonder more if I’m paying attention to the rules. Last night in class I kind of ignored the rules and the process writing. I wrote this poem. Is it any good? Is poetry better with revision? Actually, don’t answer that. Just tell me if you think this poem is good.  




Take a dog
Give it to some girl
Really give it to her
Give some girl the leaking dog

Take a girl
Take that girl and shove her
Put on the dog a little
Give her to the dog

Take a gift
Go to Florida
Get two collies
Take them at night