20 Comments

1. March 7th, 2010 / 2:04 pm Ryan Call—

   ugh, this really makes me sad.

2. March 7th, 2010 / 10:04 am Ryan Call—

   ugh, this really makes me sad.

3. March 7th, 2010 / 2:43 pm David—

   well, this sucks

4. March 7th, 2010 / 10:43 am David—

   well, this sucks

5. March 7th, 2010 / 2:44 pm Chris—

   good lord this sucks.

6. March 7th, 2010 / 10:44 am Chris—

   good lord this sucks.

7. March 7th, 2010 / 5:00 pm stephen—

   fuck, that’s sad. talented guy

8. March 7th, 2010 / 1:00 pm stephen—

   fuck, that’s sad. talented guy

9. March 7th, 2010 / 9:39 pm Jhon Baker—

   hopefully the pain is gone, hors de combat…

10. March 7th, 2010 / 5:39 pm Jhon Baker—

    hopefully the pain is gone, hors de combat…

11. March 8th, 2010 / 1:16 am ben spivey—

    rip

12. March 7th, 2010 / 9:16 pm ben spivey—

    rip

13. March 8th, 2010 / 2:13 am Steven Pine—

    Meh, suicide may as well be an advertising gimmick.

    If they had nothin’ left to give then let ’em go. Besides, I don’t relish the thought of a world where opting out is no longer an option –here’s to freedom, kanpai Mark.

14. March 7th, 2010 / 10:13 pm Steven Pine—

    Meh, suicide may as well be an advertising gimmick.

    If they had nothin’ left to give then let ’em go. Besides, I don’t relish the thought of a world where opting out is no longer an option –here’s to freedom, kanpai Mark.

15. March 8th, 2010 / 6:16 am Jhon Baker—

    I am so offended by you it has taken me two hours to put it into words. You got nothing. Go F yourself.

16. March 8th, 2010 / 2:16 am Jhon Baker—

    I am so offended by you it has taken me two hours to put it into words. You got nothing. Go F yourself.

17. March 8th, 2010 / 6:39 am james yeh—

    yeah, this is a bummer. i liked his shit a lot.

18. March 8th, 2010 / 2:39 am james yeh—

    yeah, this is a bummer. i liked his shit a lot.

19. March 8th, 2010 / 8:57 pm Neil—

    I agree with Jhon. What is the point of saying something so cruel the day of somebody’s tragic death? Irony? Humor? Trying to be controversial? Trying to attract attention to your laughable poetry blog?

    Reading it made me want to–hmm, how to put it?– I’ll use your lovely words. “I tell ya, I must of vomited out my heart” after reading your pretentious shite. “I never made-believe in the unreal world” that anyone would enjoy reading your fluff. I would rather “Betsy feedst us porridge, oatmeal, and vegetable stews,” than read your poetry. I would rather eat “dead chicken-manured flowerbeds.” But what use of simile! “I never seen her sorer, like she’s been through anal.” You are a treasure. Oh, and there’s more. “What bullshit, that first shot burned like shitting in a Mexican prison.” And brilliant use of repetition: “and since Dawn’s arrival her warmth is warm.” And what cheeky spelling! “smyling” And look at the formatting!

    “and in one goodly strike
    pierces the wood
    as you would
    a railroad tie.”

    What daring art! And the fact that he makes fun of a tragedy the day it happens means that this Steven Pine is somebody to look out for! Such a controversial and brilliant artist in our midst.

20. March 8th, 2010 / 4:57 pm Neil—

    I agree with Jhon. What is the point of saying something so cruel the day of somebody’s tragic death? Irony? Humor? Trying to be controversial? Trying to attract attention to your laughable poetry blog?

    Reading it made me want to–hmm, how to put it?– I’ll use your lovely words. “I tell ya, I must of vomited out my heart” after reading your pretentious shite. “I never made-believe in the unreal world” that anyone would enjoy reading your fluff. I would rather “Betsy feedst us porridge, oatmeal, and vegetable stews,” than read your poetry. I would rather eat “dead chicken-manured flowerbeds.” But what use of simile! “I never seen her sorer, like she’s been through anal.” You are a treasure. Oh, and there’s more. “What bullshit, that first shot burned like shitting in a Mexican prison.” And brilliant use of repetition: “and since Dawn’s arrival her warmth is warm.” And what cheeky spelling! “smyling” And look at the formatting!

    “and in one goodly strike
    pierces the wood
    as you would
    a railroad tie.”

    What daring art! And the fact that he makes fun of a tragedy the day it happens means that this Steven Pine is somebody to look out for! Such a controversial and brilliant artist in our midst.