April 29th, 2010 / 4:38 pm
Contests & Snippets

In celebration of Mr. Kimball’s & Mr. Devine’s appearance tonight, I’m giving two copies of WORDS away. Make a sentence out of these words: a, and, it, dog, runs, mother, blood, diamond, tired, heavy, wall, takes, glimpses, eats, burnt, opaque, crams, the, him, her, dead, fall, yes, their. Add your email. I’ll pick two favorites by the 9pm PST.

79 Comments

  1. Sean M

      The diamond-dog runs dead tired, glimpses their wall, fall him heavy opaque blood, eats a burnt mother, and it crams – yes, takes – her dead.

      sean dot morse at gmail dot com

  2. Sean K

      forgot skauff at gmail dot com

  3. white wedding

      13 Ways of Looking at a Blood Diamond or Her Dead Wedding

      You’ll punch out your mother in the dressing room
      at Saks, the crams of your belly can’t take her
      touching (later when other brides say: tired,
      say: heavy) (nobody eats) you’ll wonder what’s
      got them burnt up (their glimpses opaque, a fall)
      now your dress is stashed in the wall and you’re left
      with a him pretending the dog is Robert
      Pattinson–you said yes and it runs.

  4. white wedding

      can’t leave that shit unrevised. there. voila. perfect syllabics.

      13 Ways of Looking at a Blood Diamond
      or Her Dead Wedding

      You’ll punch out your mother in the dressing room
      at Saks, the crams of your belly can’t take her
      touching (later when other brides say: tired,
      say: heavy) (nobody eats) you’ll wonder what’s
      got them burnt up (their glimpses opaque, a fall)
      now your dress is stashed in the wall and you’re left
      with only a him, pretending the dog is
      Robert Pattinson, you said yes and it runs.

  5. J E Molinas

      Their him takes the her –mother– and runs it, crams it, tired, heavy, dead.

  6. wendy

      Her diamond dog crams him — the dead burnt blood, eats it, and runs. Their mother takes tired, opaque glimpses. Yes, their heavy wall takes a fall.

      hiwendyxu at gmail dot com

  7. Sarah Bonilla

      Yes, the dog runs; a mother takes, buries her diamonds covered in blood while her tired eyes throw glimpses toward burnt walls we call home, we ram into no opaque memories–but now the dead we knew falls bakward in her traps–yes, the dog runs, runs away.

  8. Jonathan S

      And, yes, it runs – a diamond dog – tired and heavy along their wall, as it glimpses, takes, eats, crams the burnt opaque mother blood left him at her dead fall.

  9. mark leidner
  10. reynard

      Her heavy fall eats the opaque diamond blood, and it takes him dead. Their tired mother crams, runs, glimpses a yes dog, burnt.

      reynard dot seifert at gmail dot com

  11. Shane Anderson

      A blood mother crams the diamond dog with glimpses, yes, it is tired and the heavy wall eats him, yes, it runs, burnt, opaque, and dead, yes, it takes her fall, their, yes.

      shane.d.anderson at gmail dot com

  12. deborah

      CRAMS
      _______

      1. blood dog takes their diamonds and eats her mother.
      2. the dead fall.
      3. heavy glimpses him, yes–tired–burnt–opaque–
      4. it runs a wall.

  13. gena

      meanwhile, as the dog eats fall blood, a mother, burnt, crams him—yes, her diamond—into their wall; it takes tired glimpses and runs—heavy, opaque, dead.

  14. reynard

      whoops, ‘a sentence’ – so:

      Her heavy fall eats the opaque diamond blood, and it takes him dead; their tired mother crams, runs, glimpses a burnt dog, yes?

  15. ael

      “Eats her, eats her dog,” runs the mother, dead and heavy, and her burnt dog glimpses her, glimpses their tired diamond, and takes the blood and crams it, a wall, opaque, and the fall, yes. monkfishjowls@gmail.com

  16. Sarah

      Him–IT–runs, a dog; heavy–YES; burnt wall, their mother glimpses and takes her fall; he eats diamond, tired, opaque, DEAD.

  17. Sarah

      (forgot a word, sorry)

      REWRITE:

      Him–IT–runs, a dog; heavy–YES; burnt wall, their mother glimpses and takes her fall; he crams, eats diamond, tired, opaque, DEAD.

  18. Sarah

      (Forgot ANOTHER WORD)

      Him–IT–runs, a dog; heavy–YES; blood-burnt wall, their mother glimpses and takes her fall; he crams, eats diamond, tired, opaque, DEAD.

  19. Sabra Embury

      A fall, it takes, eats–mother crams him, burnt and opaque; her glimpses diamond heavy, dog tired dead, yes–their wall runs blood.

      Fun.

  20. Miguel

      Their blood, him, her, heavy together, what she glimpses, eats up, is burnt, what he takes of her, “oh, yes,” he says, “oh, yeah,” he says, “it,” he says, “this is it,” she says, “that’s it,” he says, “heavy” he says, runs up against the wall, their dog-crams, the tired feel–no cigarettes involved–the fall outside, nothing heavy yet, nothing dead, and to come of it?, not one diamond, a future mother though, a stone inside, opaque.

      miguelreymorales@gmail.com

  21. white wedding

      13 Ways of Looking at a Blood Diamond or Her Dead Wedding

      You’ll punch out your mother in the dressing room
      at Saks, the crams of your belly can’t take her
      touching (later when other brides say: tired,
      say: heavy) (nobody eats) you’ll wonder what’s
      got them burnt up (their glimpses opaque, a fall)
      now your dress is stashed in the wall and you’re left
      with a him pretending the dog is Robert
      Pattinson–you said yes and it runs.

  22. white wedding

      can’t leave that shit unrevised. there. voila. perfect syllabics.

      13 Ways of Looking at a Blood Diamond
      or Her Dead Wedding

      You’ll punch out your mother in the dressing room
      at Saks, the crams of your belly can’t take her
      touching (later when other brides say: tired,
      say: heavy) (nobody eats) you’ll wonder what’s
      got them burnt up (their glimpses opaque, a fall)
      now your dress is stashed in the wall and you’re left
      with only a him, pretending the dog is
      Robert Pattinson, you said yes and it runs.

  23. Joseph Young

      Diamondtiredthedeadfallandrunsamotherdog, himcramstheirbloodher, itglimpseseatstakesopaque, yesheavywall, burnt.

  24. MoGa

      I already have it, so this is just for fun. This was fun. Thanks.

      Their burnt blood mother wall runs; yes, a heavy fall; crams her diamond dog and eats him; takes opaque the tired it dead glimpses.

  25. mimi

      Her dead-tired-heavy-mother-blood-fall, it runs, opaque, a wall, and the diamond dog, burnt, glimpses, crams, takes him, eats their yes.

  26. Joseph Young

      Diamondtiredthedeadfallandrunsamotherdog, himcramstheirbloodher, itglimpseseatstakesopaque, yesheavywall, burnt.

  27. Molly Gaudry

      I already have it, so this is just for fun. This was fun. Thanks.

      Their burnt blood mother wall runs; yes, a heavy fall; crams her diamond dog and eats him; takes opaque the tired it dead glimpses.

  28. mimi

      Her dead-tired-heavy-mother-blood-fall, it runs, opaque, a wall, and the diamond dog, burnt, glimpses, crams, takes him, eats their yes.

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