September 23rd, 2009 / 11:13 am
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60 Word Short Story Reviews

shortbedBaltimore’s City Paper is currently running a series of short story reviews in 60 words or less. It’s insanely difficult to try to capture something that briefly. I’m not thrilled with my encapsulation of Giant contributor Ryan Call’s story “I Pilot My Bed Deep Into the Night,” which appeared in Keyhole 7, but what the heck. It was fun trying. Or maybe it was stressful, because I had to keep throwing away words and I thought I was killing his amazing story. Other reviews include a Breece Pancake story from Justin Sirois (who chose to use the expletive “damn” as one of his words), Barry Hannah’s “Constant Pain in Tuscaloosa” by Tim Kreider, and a couple dozen others. Here’s a writer to know: Dambudzo Marechera, covered by Bret McCabe.  

The Bar-Stool Edible Worm
by Dambudzo Marechera

I am against everything
Against war and those against
War.
Against whatever diminishes
Th’individual’s blind impulse.

Shake the peaches down from
The summer poem, Rake in ripe
Luminosity; dust; taste. Lunchtime
News – pass the Castor Oil, Alice.

I think the most remarkable review is Jamie Gaughran-Perez’s take on “Hills Like White Elephants,” because he doesn’t shy away from quoting the word “please” for seven of his 60 words. There are 27 reviews in all, which means you can can get mildly familiar with 27 stories and only have to read 1620 words.

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18 Comments

  1. Matthias Rascher

      Hm, the Twitterisation of literary criticism. I’m not sure if I should be happy about this (wordy waffle disguised as a review can be such a nuisance to read) or shake my fists at the heavens and cry out loud (can 60 words really do justice even to a short story?).

  2. Matthias Rascher

      Hm, the Twitterisation of literary criticism. I’m not sure if I should be happy about this (wordy waffle disguised as a review can be such a nuisance to read) or shake my fists at the heavens and cry out loud (can 60 words really do justice even to a short story?).

  3. david erlewine

      i love the concept and will check out

  4. david erlewine

      i love the concept and will check out

  5. Adam R

      You know, Matthias, that Twitter thing didn’t occur to me. Thankfully. Also, it isn’t referenced anywhere in the article. I don’t think it was about twitterisation at all, though I can’t deny the unfortunate parallel.

      I think, largely, the experiment shows that no, 60 words can’t do justice to a short story.

  6. Adam R

      You know, Matthias, that Twitter thing didn’t occur to me. Thankfully. Also, it isn’t referenced anywhere in the article. I don’t think it was about twitterisation at all, though I can’t deny the unfortunate parallel.

      I think, largely, the experiment shows that no, 60 words can’t do justice to a short story.

  7. darby

      blurbs

  8. darby

      blurbs

  9. Matthias Rascher

      I’m afraid you’re right. I also couldn’t help but notice that some reviewers stretched the rules of mathematics quite a bit to get their review into this series.

  10. Matthias Rascher

      I’m afraid you’re right. I also couldn’t help but notice that some reviewers stretched the rules of mathematics quite a bit to get their review into this series.

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  13. jamiegp

      Not to be inflammatory, but “60 words can’t do justice to a short story” is kinda bullshit unless you have too rigid definition of “justice.” After all, you could say, “2,500 words can’t do justice to a life experience”… and then what does that leave you with re a short story. Or “50,000 words can’t do justice to a life” …and where does that leave that whole “biography” tradition.

      I like haiku… I just don’t expect them to do the same work a novel is trying to get done.

  14. jamiegp

      Not to be inflammatory, but “60 words can’t do justice to a short story” is kinda bullshit unless you have too rigid definition of “justice.” After all, you could say, “2,500 words can’t do justice to a life experience”… and then what does that leave you with re a short story. Or “50,000 words can’t do justice to a life” …and where does that leave that whole “biography” tradition.

      I like haiku… I just don’t expect them to do the same work a novel is trying to get done.

  15. Adam R

      Justice exists only in the minds of the philosophers, as John Milbank said.

      Class, I think the logical fallacy in Mr. GP’s argument is innocence by association — you can’t conclude that X works because Y and Z have proven successful.

  16. Adam R

      Justice exists only in the minds of the philosophers, as John Milbank said.

      Class, I think the logical fallacy in Mr. GP’s argument is innocence by association — you can’t conclude that X works because Y and Z have proven successful.

  17. jamiegp

      There is no logical fallacy. ;)

      You either buy into the fact that things are reducible without complete loss or not. 60 words is way longer than most haikus and people tend to accept them as capturing something… so the 60 word barrier hasn’t crossed some atomic limit of sense.

      You could say reduction = destruction and I’d surely enjoy a beer with you on that topic, you could even get my vote if you vote my way on DC statehood or gay marriage.

      “Eskimo.”

  18. jamiegp

      There is no logical fallacy. ;)

      You either buy into the fact that things are reducible without complete loss or not. 60 words is way longer than most haikus and people tend to accept them as capturing something… so the 60 word barrier hasn’t crossed some atomic limit of sense.

      You could say reduction = destruction and I’d surely enjoy a beer with you on that topic, you could even get my vote if you vote my way on DC statehood or gay marriage.

      “Eskimo.”