March 27th, 2010 / 11:49 pm
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drunk sonnet # 18

Damn, I thought this was going to be more dramatic, bit to re-shoot and all that is really not in the spirit of drunk sonnets. I’ll do another later. I am actually drunk. So sorry here. Some times with I could act more drunk when drunk, so sorry. But  i sure as hell shot this poem and will shoot another better later. I do believe is shooting poems, as do you. i keep hearing birds.

S

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23 Comments

  1. anon

      Maybe I’m misinterpreting what you wrote. You got drunk to do the drunk reading but it didn’t come out drunk enough?

      I just watched that movie ‘Humpday.’ In it, two straight guys are going to make a porno together. They are both committed to doing it. They end up a the hotel room but can’t go through with it. One guy leaves and the other just sits in the hotel room. The ending felt like such an epic failure, a failure of will, proof of humanity’s inability to transcend the bullshit that is humanity.

      You got drunk to read a poem drunk, but it wasn’t drunk enough. I forgive you, man… I’m sorry it didn’t come out right, too. All of this makes me sad. Why can’t we just do it? We can’t we make it right? Fuck…

  2. anon

      Maybe I’m misinterpreting what you wrote. You got drunk to do the drunk reading but it didn’t come out drunk enough?

      I just watched that movie ‘Humpday.’ In it, two straight guys are going to make a porno together. They are both committed to doing it. They end up a the hotel room but can’t go through with it. One guy leaves and the other just sits in the hotel room. The ending felt like such an epic failure, a failure of will, proof of humanity’s inability to transcend the bullshit that is humanity.

      You got drunk to read a poem drunk, but it wasn’t drunk enough. I forgive you, man… I’m sorry it didn’t come out right, too. All of this makes me sad. Why can’t we just do it? We can’t we make it right? Fuck…

  3. gc

      “Yes.”

  4. gc

      “Yes.”

  5. gc
  6. gc
  7. Laura Ellen Scott

      Sean, this is very dramatic, what with the gun, the BIG WATCH, and the shorts and all. The only change I recommend is showing the gun first to increase the commercial appeal.

  8. Laura Ellen Scott

      Sean, this is very dramatic, what with the gun, the BIG WATCH, and the shorts and all. The only change I recommend is showing the gun first to increase the commercial appeal.

  9. Jhon Baker

      that’s what I like to do, get drunk and fuck around with guns. Yup, think I’m gonna get out my Colt .45 or maybe just the P22, get loaded while loading and read some poetry.
      Actually, this sounds kinda fun.

      Really though, Sean, this is a great and fun post.

  10. Jhon Baker

      that’s what I like to do, get drunk and fuck around with guns. Yup, think I’m gonna get out my Colt .45 or maybe just the P22, get loaded while loading and read some poetry.
      Actually, this sounds kinda fun.

      Really though, Sean, this is a great and fun post.

  11. Sean

      I wasn’t fucking around. I was shooting poetry.

      I like Laura’s idea of introducing the gun earlier.

      Next I will shoot a collection of short stories so if you have a candidate send it to me. I will read it and then shoot it.

  12. Sean

      I wasn’t fucking around. I was shooting poetry.

      I like Laura’s idea of introducing the gun earlier.

      Next I will shoot a collection of short stories so if you have a candidate send it to me. I will read it and then shoot it.

  13. xtx

      i liked your accent and when it showed your boxer shorts and how you said, ‘gun’. i could also tell you were drunk.

  14. xtx

      i liked your accent and when it showed your boxer shorts and how you said, ‘gun’. i could also tell you were drunk.

  15. magick mike

      “htmlgiant weekends”

  16. magick mike

      “htmlgiant weekends”

  17. Jhon Baker

      I apologize for not utilizing a Sarcmark – although I truly believed that the last sentence cleared up any understanding. As where I am not into shooting poetry I support the idea of shooting short stories and I would have to recommended anything by Bukowski. Mostly because I think he would find it funny as hell.

  18. Jhon Baker

      I apologize for not utilizing a Sarcmark – although I truly believed that the last sentence cleared up any understanding. As where I am not into shooting poetry I support the idea of shooting short stories and I would have to recommended anything by Bukowski. Mostly because I think he would find it funny as hell.

  19. dan

      sean, this rules. i hope more people shoot my poems or do equally awesome things to them.

  20. dan

      sean, this rules. i hope more people shoot my poems or do equally awesome things to them.

  21. dan

      also, my name is casey mcsomething. why haven’t i promoted my shit on this thread yet?

  22. dan

      also, my name is casey mcsomething. why haven’t i promoted my shit on this thread yet?

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