October 11th, 2009 / 4:58 pm
Snippets

Rad story “Never, Ever Bring This Up Again” by Nick Ripatrazone takes runner up in the Esquire fiction contest.

8 Comments

  1. Patrick

      Anyone else less than thrilled with the winner?

  2. Patrick

      Anyone else less than thrilled with the winner?

  3. stu

      Not really fond of any of those. I wish I had known about this. I am just not on top of things.

  4. stu

      Not really fond of any of those. I wish I had known about this. I am just not on top of things.

  5. joseph

      they kinda read as though they had been wrung hard through a focus group.

  6. joseph

      they kinda read as though they had been wrung hard through a focus group.

  7. Tim Horvath

      I actually enjoyed it. At times it felt like a kid on a Sucralose-and-prime-numbered-red-dye high clamoring for attention. And throughout, it felt like it was written by the poet laureate of a land called Esquiria, where advice to newlyweds about how “faith in fucking” trumps home decor and news blips about “flavor injectors” are given–but always with an irony that betrays that the editor’s read his/her Delillo.

      But I really like the terrain traversed by these lines: “Here’s a secret: An embryonic bat skeleton at day eighty has enough digits to high-five your ass. These mammals and their magic proteins are mapping flight plans like Howard Hughes and terrorists.”

  8. Tim Horvath

      I actually enjoyed it. At times it felt like a kid on a Sucralose-and-prime-numbered-red-dye high clamoring for attention. And throughout, it felt like it was written by the poet laureate of a land called Esquiria, where advice to newlyweds about how “faith in fucking” trumps home decor and news blips about “flavor injectors” are given–but always with an irony that betrays that the editor’s read his/her Delillo.

      But I really like the terrain traversed by these lines: “Here’s a secret: An embryonic bat skeleton at day eighty has enough digits to high-five your ass. These mammals and their magic proteins are mapping flight plans like Howard Hughes and terrorists.”