May 10th, 2010 / 6:51 pm
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  1. darby

      orts

  2. darby

      orts

  3. Chu

      Just finished the Lipsky book. It made me sad.

  4. Chu

      Just finished the Lipsky book. It made me sad.

  5. Lily Hoang

      It made me angry, he’s so fucking great.

  6. Lily Hoang

      It made me angry, he’s so fucking great.

  7. zuysa

      i’m on the verge of finishing IJ. it reads like it was written for a robot professor to compute then auto-summarize. after the nth digression that literally went nowhere, i started to think of how many arguments DFWs must’ve put himself through to avoid doing any real serious edits on the text. with that said, the most memorable passages in the book dwell on ultra-violence.

  8. demi-puppet

      I dunno, the editing process w/ IJ seems like it was pretty thorough.

  9. demi-puppet

      I dunno, the editing process w/ IJ seems like it was pretty thorough.

  10. darby

      orts

  11. anna

      unsure whether this has already been posted somewhere on this site / how much this is old news, will link it anyway: “fictional futures and the conspicuously young” by dfw: http://neugierig.org/content/dfw/ffacy.pdf

  12. anna

      unsure whether this has already been posted somewhere on this site / how much this is old news, will link it anyway: “fictional futures and the conspicuously young” by dfw: http://neugierig.org/content/dfw/ffacy.pdf

  13. zuysa

      i’m talking about edits w/r/t overall composition. this may seem a bit bitchy to slag on about (since i didn’t write the damn book, after all) so but i’m convinced that 400-500 pages or so could be whacked out of that thing and it would still be just as impactful.

      i decided to read IJ to find out what the hoopla was all about and have come away from the experience thinking that a lot of the people championing the book have likely never read it. i can’t say the same for any other lit. ‘classic’ i’ve ever read that’s on some list of 100 best books ever.

      the whole thing’s left me rather bitter.

  14. stephen

      thanks, anna

  15. stephen

      thanks, anna

  16. zuysa

      this made my day: Only considerations of space and legal liability restrain me from sharing with you in detail the persistent legend, at one nameless institution, of the embalmed cadaver cadged from the medical school by two deeply troubled young M.F.A. candidates, enrolled in a workshop at their proxy, smuggled pre-bell into the seminar room each week, and propped in its assigned seat, there to clutch a pencil in its white fist and stare straight ahead with an expression of somewhat rigid good cheer. The name of the legend is “The Cadaver That Got a B.”

  17. Chu

      Just finished the Lipsky book. It made me sad.

  18. taco

      for fucks sake, can we please stop mythologizing this man? big deal, he used a dictionary and circled some words. these words aren’t going to shed any new light on his oeuvre.

  19. taco

      for fucks sake, can we please stop mythologizing this man? big deal, he used a dictionary and circled some words. these words aren’t going to shed any new light on his oeuvre.

  20. lily hoang

      It made me angry, he’s so fucking great.

  21. anna

      you’re welcome

  22. anna

      you’re welcome

  23. demi-puppet

      I dunno, the editing process w/ IJ seems like it was pretty thorough.

  24. anna

      unsure whether this has already been posted somewhere on this site / how much this is old news, will link it anyway: “fictional futures and the conspicuously young” by dfw: http://neugierig.org/content/dfw/ffacy.pdf

  25. stephen

      thanks, anna

  26. taco

      for fucks sake, can we please stop mythologizing this man? big deal, he used a dictionary and circled some words. these words aren’t going to shed any new light on his oeuvre.

  27. demi-puppet

      Yeah, that’s what I meant. DFW worked on the edits with Michael Pietch(sp) and Steven Moore; many scenes were cut, many scenes were not cut but greatly compressed, and many scenes were revised over and over and over again, and his editor’s insistence. There’s a lot of info out there on this, if you’re interested. The new DFW archive even has letters from his editor, I think.

      I can understand not appreciating IJ, but let’s not be stupid. I’ve read the book like 10x, and I know many others who have read it many many times. The book had its flaws, sure, but it’s still pretty goddamned great.

  28. demi-puppet

      Yeah, that’s what I meant. DFW worked on the edits with Michael Pietch(sp) and Steven Moore; many scenes were cut, many scenes were not cut but greatly compressed, and many scenes were revised over and over and over again, and his editor’s insistence. There’s a lot of info out there on this, if you’re interested. The new DFW archive even has letters from his editor, I think.

      I can understand not appreciating IJ, but let’s not be stupid. I’ve read the book like 10x, and I know many others who have read it many many times. The book had its flaws, sure, but it’s still pretty goddamned great.

  29. anna

      you’re welcome

  30. zusya

      im still holding out hope that the last hundred pages or so melt my face, explodes my head, explodes my face, melts my head, just something that makes me feel like it was all worth it.

      honestly, taking out a month to read an entire encyclopedia concomitant with extensive family therapy feels like it would be a better use of the time.

  31. demi-puppet

      During my first read, the last hundred pages or so constituted one of the most remarkable experiences I’ve had in my life. An uneasy blend of feeling completely 100% connected to a text, and feeling sad about the end of the text being so near.

  32. demi-puppet

      During my first read, the last hundred pages or so constituted one of the most remarkable experiences I’ve had in my life. An uneasy blend of feeling completely 100% connected to a text, and feeling sad about the end of the text being so near.

  33. ce.

      This is like the DFW version of the recently viral Google Map of all the places mentioned in Mountain Goats songs.

  34. ce.

      This is like the DFW version of the recently viral Google Map of all the places mentioned in Mountain Goats songs.

  35. ce.
  36. ce.
  37. zusya

      hah, this could be a pretty good conceptual study re: lit.: how did do you feel for [name of book] as you read the book from beginning to end?

      with the first chapter of IJ i felt: sweet, a study of a guy with asperger’s syndrome.

      several hundred chapters later i was like: this novel is like a vonnegut classic with terminal cancer.

      100+ pages from the end (including footnotes): this was three novels crammed into one for reasons that make very little sense. also starting to understand the fascination with the concept of “boredom” his next novel is meant to “explore.”

      after finishing: N/A

  38. demi-puppet

      Yeah, that’s what I meant. DFW worked on the edits with Michael Pietch(sp) and Steven Moore; many scenes were cut, many scenes were not cut but greatly compressed, and many scenes were revised over and over and over again, and his editor’s insistence. There’s a lot of info out there on this, if you’re interested. The new DFW archive even has letters from his editor, I think.

      I can understand not appreciating IJ, but let’s not be stupid. I’ve read the book like 10x, and I know many others who have read it many many times. The book had its flaws, sure, but it’s still pretty goddamned great.

  39. D

      Too late. He’s a legend and rightfully so.

  40. D

      Too late. He’s a legend and rightfully so.

  41. demi-puppet

      During my first read, the last hundred pages or so constituted one of the most remarkable experiences I’ve had in my life. An uneasy blend of feeling completely 100% connected to a text, and feeling sad about the end of the text being so near.

  42. ce.

      This is like the DFW version of the recently viral Google Map of all the places mentioned in Mountain Goats songs.

  43. ce.
  44. D

      Too late. He’s a legend and rightfully so.

  45. JW

      I think that by naming the book, and the symbol that stands at its centre, Infinite Jest you’re always going to have to go some way to achieving this sort of effect in structure. Sure there were passages that seemed to last aeons for me, but I was never having a bad time with the text. I think in these areas it moved towards that catatonic bliss that is so important.

      Plus, when the heavy-hitting bits come, the violence, sex and background, they land so hard and it’s impossible to ignore or bring yourself to put down. Much like a tape that is so […] neither you or anyone else can drag you from it.

  46. JW

      I think that by naming the book, and the symbol that stands at its centre, Infinite Jest you’re always going to have to go some way to achieving this sort of effect in structure. Sure there were passages that seemed to last aeons for me, but I was never having a bad time with the text. I think in these areas it moved towards that catatonic bliss that is so important.

      Plus, when the heavy-hitting bits come, the violence, sex and background, they land so hard and it’s impossible to ignore or bring yourself to put down. Much like a tape that is so […] neither you or anyone else can drag you from it.

  47. JW

      I think that by naming the book, and the symbol that stands at its centre, Infinite Jest you’re always going to have to go some way to achieving this sort of effect in structure. Sure there were passages that seemed to last aeons for me, but I was never having a bad time with the text. I think in these areas it moved towards that catatonic bliss that is so important.

      Plus, when the heavy-hitting bits come, the violence, sex and background, they land so hard and it’s impossible to ignore or bring yourself to put down. Much like a tape that is so […] neither you or anyone else can drag you from it.

  48. Michael Filippone

      It made me both.

  49. Michael Filippone

      It made me both.

  50. Michael Filippone

      Tennis is on the list.

  51. Michael Filippone

      Tennis is on the list.

  52. Michael Filippone

      It made me both.

  53. Michael Filippone

      Tennis is on the list.

  54. mimi

      Here is a list of all the words I had to look up in the dictionary while reading ONE David Foster Wallace short story, “Tri-Stan: I Sold Sissee Nar to Ecko”:
      epiclete
      esurient
      crispate
      telephemically
      oneirically
      nystagmic
      callid
      dithyrabicizes
      invidious
      dybbuk
      benthic
      palpebral
      morphean*
      thanaticism
      sibilant**
      parthenopic
      threnody
      fulgence
      anamnetic
      thanaphiliacal
      Empedoclean
      ortolan
      oneiromancy***
      peripetially
      imbricately
      epexegetic
      descantant
      periphrastic
      mithridatitic
      epexegesis****
      Encomium

      Here is a list of all the words I felt ‘proud to say’ I already knew the meaning of:
      kudzu
      carie
      erythema
      comedones
      gingivitic
      mythopoeic
      mythopoeia
      apotheosis
      miscegenate
      cloacal
      littoral
      chimeracity
      vulgate
      phogistic
      neurasthenics
      carbuncular
      desiderative
      miscegenation

      Here’s a list of words that I already knew the meaning of, didn’t feel particularly ‘proud’:
      aegis
      remunerated
      sartorially
      factota
      undulant
      moebioid
      paroxysms
      aquilinity
      mythophilic
      kabal
      senescence
      hirsutely
      ineluctable
      implacable
      pulchritude
      continence
      recumbency
      narcosis
      aphasiac
      retumesced

      And whaddup with ‘unionized’ on page 249? “Am I to read this ‘un-ion-ized’ or ‘union-ized’?” I thought for a split second. But then I seamlessly conjectured that the text’s ‘unionized melt’ was the slow fade-to-black of a just-turned-off cathode tube.

      And ‘triballistic’ gave me a little throb. I like the ‘tribal’ in there. ‘tri-ballistic’/ ‘tribal-listic’ (sic).

      In conclusion I would like to say that this story had a lot of fancy words in it.

      My two favorite words in the whole story were “Kill Fee”.

      * (previously thought I knew what this word means, realized I didn’t)
      ** (felt bad I didn’t know this one)
      *** (didn’t actually hafta look this one up, having already looked up oneirically)
      **** (!)

  55. mimi

      Here is a list of all the words I had to look up in the dictionary while reading ONE David Foster Wallace short story, “Tri-Stan: I Sold Sissee Nar to Ecko”:
      epiclete
      esurient
      crispate
      telephemically
      oneirically
      nystagmic
      callid
      dithyrabicizes
      invidious
      dybbuk
      benthic
      palpebral
      morphean*
      thanaticism
      sibilant**
      parthenopic
      threnody
      fulgence
      anamnetic
      thanaphiliacal
      Empedoclean
      ortolan
      oneiromancy***
      peripetially
      imbricately
      epexegetic
      descantant
      periphrastic
      mithridatitic
      epexegesis****
      Encomium

      Here is a list of all the words I felt ‘proud to say’ I already knew the meaning of:
      kudzu
      carie
      erythema
      comedones
      gingivitic
      mythopoeic
      mythopoeia
      apotheosis
      miscegenate
      cloacal
      littoral
      chimeracity
      vulgate
      phogistic
      neurasthenics
      carbuncular
      desiderative
      miscegenation

      Here’s a list of words that I already knew the meaning of, didn’t feel particularly ‘proud’:
      aegis
      remunerated
      sartorially
      factota
      undulant
      moebioid
      paroxysms
      aquilinity
      mythophilic
      kabal
      senescence
      hirsutely
      ineluctable
      implacable
      pulchritude
      continence
      recumbency
      narcosis
      aphasiac
      retumesced

      And whaddup with ‘unionized’ on page 249? “Am I to read this ‘un-ion-ized’ or ‘union-ized’?” I thought for a split second. But then I seamlessly conjectured that the text’s ‘unionized melt’ was the slow fade-to-black of a just-turned-off cathode tube.

      And ‘triballistic’ gave me a little throb. I like the ‘tribal’ in there. ‘tri-ballistic’/ ‘tribal-listic’ (sic).

      In conclusion I would like to say that this story had a lot of fancy words in it.

      My two favorite words in the whole story were “Kill Fee”.

      * (previously thought I knew what this word means, realized I didn’t)
      ** (felt bad I didn’t know this one)
      *** (didn’t actually hafta look this one up, having already looked up oneirically)
      **** (!)

  56. mimi

      * sibylant, rather

  57. mimi

      * sibylant, rather

  58. mimi

      Here is a list of all the words I had to look up in the dictionary while reading ONE David Foster Wallace short story, “Tri-Stan: I Sold Sissee Nar to Ecko”:
      epiclete
      esurient
      crispate
      telephemically
      oneirically
      nystagmic
      callid
      dithyrabicizes
      invidious
      dybbuk
      benthic
      palpebral
      morphean*
      thanaticism
      sibilant**
      parthenopic
      threnody
      fulgence
      anamnetic
      thanaphiliacal
      Empedoclean
      ortolan
      oneiromancy***
      peripetially
      imbricately
      epexegetic
      descantant
      periphrastic
      mithridatitic
      epexegesis****
      Encomium

      Here is a list of all the words I felt ‘proud to say’ I already knew the meaning of:
      kudzu
      carie
      erythema
      comedones
      gingivitic
      mythopoeic
      mythopoeia
      apotheosis
      miscegenate
      cloacal
      littoral
      chimeracity
      vulgate
      phogistic
      neurasthenics
      carbuncular
      desiderative
      miscegenation

      Here’s a list of words that I already knew the meaning of, didn’t feel particularly ‘proud’:
      aegis
      remunerated
      sartorially
      factota
      undulant
      moebioid
      paroxysms
      aquilinity
      mythophilic
      kabal
      senescence
      hirsutely
      ineluctable
      implacable
      pulchritude
      continence
      recumbency
      narcosis
      aphasiac
      retumesced

      And whaddup with ‘unionized’ on page 249? “Am I to read this ‘un-ion-ized’ or ‘union-ized’?” I thought for a split second. But then I seamlessly conjectured that the text’s ‘unionized melt’ was the slow fade-to-black of a just-turned-off cathode tube.

      And ‘triballistic’ gave me a little throb. I like the ‘tribal’ in there. ‘tri-ballistic’/ ‘tribal-listic’ (sic).

      In conclusion I would like to say that this story had a lot of fancy words in it.

      My two favorite words in the whole story were “Kill Fee”.

      * (previously thought I knew what this word means, realized I didn’t)
      ** (felt bad I didn’t know this one)
      *** (didn’t actually hafta look this one up, having already looked up oneirically)
      **** (!)

  59. mimi

      * sibylant, rather