“HIS LAST DAYS AS AN ARTIST”
“HIS LAST DAYS
AS AN ARTIST”
Slash Lovering
60 min
[2011, partial, unpublished bootleg – Erik Stinson, 2013]
Characters
CARL – male, 29
LINDA – female, 24
ROMAN – male, 29, work friend of Carl
SOPHIE – female, 22, a reveler
1 EXT Bushwick, Monday night, in the quiet of the early
work week, walking from the train, then INT at CARL’s
apartment.
(CARL walks down a long street at sunset. he
carries a work bag. He wears business casual. He is out of place in this environment. The street and the sidewalk are dirty. His business is elsewhere. This is his comfortable escape.)
(CARL in his apartment seems relaxed. His life
appear to be in order. There is no sign of a plot, a great love, a passion. We only see evidence of a work life.
2 EXT, Broadway, morning. His “audit of civilization,”
walking the length of Broadway on a Saturday (first
sighting of woman).
(We see CARL’s ritual walk down Broadway. He is
familiar with the landmarks. He passes an art store, several banks, department store displays, showrooms. He looks at everything with a mixture of indifference and fatigue. Finally, LINDA catches his eye, but he loses her in a crowd. He wants to find her.)
3 EXT. West Side 20s, 30s, early evening, walking past
galleries to sit and look at the water. Carl sees Linda
again.
LINDA
(To someone off camera.)
There’s nothing left that I want to look at.
CARL
(Passes her, catching these fragments of
conversation)
LINDA
I can’t spend my hours in the computer. There’s nothing left. I spend my days in the sun and my nights out, wherever.
CARL
(Carl leans against a wall, listening.)
LINDA
The best thing to do is to control the people in control. It’s a system of creative direction. Do you know about creative destruction?
CARL
(He moves away in the direction of the Hudson,
missing the rest of her conversation)
LINDA
Men who are not artists miss the point, but they do not miss art. When men deny art, they are becoming artists of a bigger reality. The man I want is performing his life as an unconscious act of art that exceeds death. An act of art that defines life.
(CARL relaxes on bench, viewing the Hudson
river.)
Later outside a different gallery.
LINDA
You look familiar but I think it was a dream.
CARL
I was definitely a dream.
LINDA
Who are you here with?
CARL
I come to things alone sometimes.
LINDA
Yes, me too, me too.
CARL
Do you want to see about the wine?
LINDA
Yes.
4 Chinatown, weeknight, CARL drunk, explaining dark pools
of capital to a friend.
CARL
This issue of dark capital is hard for you yeah?
ROMAN
It’s not obvious. And the way you use social data. I
don’t understand.
CARL
The markets are like desire without an object. They are pure wanting.
ROMAN
I don’t understand.
A general pause.
CARL
This woman. She doesn’t work.
ROMAN
For you? Why would she?
CARL
No, she works for me. It’s about how she doesn’t pass her time. She prefers nothing to something.
ROMAN
This generation needs is 3-5 years of experience for job titles that have only existed for 1 year. She doesn’t want to play along.
CARL
She doesn’t like my work.
ROMAN
Who does? Money for money’s sake? Why?
CARL
Money for the sake of the world moving, for the sake of liquid, food, birth.
ROMAN
Power. I see.
(He looks tired)
CARL
Banking is OK. Being a banker is OK. It’s not really something I thought would be possible. I didn’t think that people like me worked at banks. I thought everyone would despise me because I would rather avoid their happy hours and weddings and little personal dramas of meaning and failure. I’m just… I just can’t involve myself. But being indifferent at a bank isn’t a problem anymore. The culture of business has merged with the end of all culture.
ROMAN
Does she know about the painting?
CARL
She’ll never know about the painting.
5 UWS river park, weeknight, drunk, urban primitive, very
long shots, romance scene
LINDA
Life could just be the hours of confusion between work and sleep.
CARL
All this is confusion.
LINDA
No, this is the quiet.
CARL
If I stop moving, all the lights in my office will turn off. That’s how it is for everything. That’s why we are sleeping together. To keep the lights on.
LINDA
The lights are on?
The scene changes dramatically, within the park.
CARL
How could you make more money than I make? I make all the money. I am the money. Don’t feel bad because you make less money. Feel angry or feel nothing. That’s how money makes us cold.
LINDA
Yeah. I guess I just don’t understand. I’m only good with people.
CARL
This, for example, you want power over just one man? Somehow, this will be enough?
LINDA
I don’t know.
(A pause)
Where did we first meet?
CARL
At a party.
LINDA
Really?
CARL
Wait – no. Do you like, believe in streetwear?
LINDA
What.
CARL
I think I saw you walking somewhere.
LINDA
Where?
CARL
Broadway maybe.
LINDA
I’m uncomfortable. Are we going to dinner?
CARL
I think so, yes.
LINDA
Where are we going to dinner?
CARL
Just come with me.
6 INT, Midtown, morning, a photo studio. a demonstration of
the artful economy, the concessions of finance office
life, abstracted away from the office “chrimatistikos.”
CARL
(To the team assembled)
I’m here to oversee the shoot for this brochure.
CARL
(To the photographer)
I fully support dumb art. Finally. When I was a painter, I tried to do that, but I failed.
CARL
(To the photographer)
I’m unable to continue producing the mythology of my own life, I’m giving in to the easy purity of finance work, the pursuit of order. I have achieved calm.
CARL
At first I thought of my job as a shift in the way I
practice, but now, it just seems like unconscious
living. More than just a small change, I fear.
7 EXT. NIGHT. Outside of a club in Tribeca. SOPHIE and CARL stand close together at the edge of the light.
CARL
It’s not a question of my personal culture.
SOPHIE
Everything is culture.
CARL
(Looks at some suited men getting out of a luxury car)
SOPHIE
Why do you look at those men?
CARL
I just wish I could be more like them. They are better Americans. They are pure.
SOPHIE
You’re crazy. You are not a banker.
Much later.
SOPHIE
I want to say that you are in film?
CARL
No. I’m a banker.
CARL
Maybe I used to be kind of an artist. Those guys back there (points), we all had a studio together.
SOPHIE
How did you stop? she asks.
(She’s drinking a whiskey he paid for.)
CARL
I just stopped trying to make things that came into my mind. I let go of that. I didn’t touch the paint brush. And slowly, I just kind of stopped needing it. Maybe I won’t need it again.
SOPHIE
You can’t give up. You won’t.
CARL
I just did.
8. INT, night, LINDA with friends.
(LINDA moves around in a crowded bar. There is
no sign of CARL.)
The camera moves out of the bar, to the street.
CUTS back to LINDA speaking to a friend.
LINDA
It’s stupid when they just stop calling. It’s one
thing to have a conversation, but this guy was so
wrapped up in his work – he said he was a banker, but I don’t know – then he just disappeared.
CUT to CARL looking at the Hudson.
CROSSCUT to business stationary describing a new ETF fund called “LINDA.”
CARL VO
With the approval of key investors, I’d like to begin selling LINDA on the closed markets within the month. The model fund is charting well and traders are demanding a product that trades on consumer sentiment, in real time. Gentlemen, this one could really be what the company needs, now, and going forward.
[Continues… – Erik Stinson]
TREATMENT NOTES
“HIS LAST DAYS AS AN ARTIST” IS A VIDEO NARRATIVE THAT IS ESSENTIALLY FLAT, AND AS NUMBINGLY UNGLAMOROUS, AS THE AESTHETICS OF A CERTAIN DEPRESSED AMERICAN LIFESTYLE, TAKING PLACE IN NEW YORK CITY. THE EXPERIENCE IS A VISUAL EXPLORATION OF DULL DIGITAL TEXTURE, DEFEAT, BOREDOM, ANTI-FASHION, AND SUPREME MEDIOCRITY UNDER HARSH CULTURAL AND ECONOMIC CIRCUMSTANCES. IT IS AN EXTRAPOLATION OF NEW MEDIUMS OF DIGITAL DESPERATION (INSTAGRAM, TWITTER, OKCUPID) INTO A LONGER WORK, A MASSIVE PERSONAL ARTIFACT OF AN IMPERSONAL TECH CULTURE BENT ON HUGE INFORMATION SYSTEMS, EVERYDAY DRONE WARFARE, AND A HEALTH CULTURE LEANING INTO THE CHEMICAL VOID. IT IS A CYBER ATTACK ON SICKENINGLY-SLICK CONVENTIONAL HD STORYTELLING.
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sweet
& thus all futures are speculative