writing about large groups of people

Youtube Teaches Me Something about Writing: The Social Life of Small Urban Spaces

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q0TYY7jflz8

This is one of my favorite documentaries. The quality of this Youtube transfer is not great, but it’s worth it for the voice over.

I have trouble writing accurately about the way large groups of people congregate. This means my stories tend to cut away as many characters as I can, leaving singles and duos and trios doing all the work. I depopulate, and sometimes I think maybe I should try to populate and maybe even over populate a story. But I’m hesitant. You, too? Maybe repeatedly watching this will help.

Power quote from about three and a half minutes into part two: “This artifact is a design object the purpose of which is to punctuate architectural photographs. It has some utility as a bench but is usually placed in isolation.”

How often do you, as a writer, favor an object, a character, a fleeting moment’s emotional eruption for it’s aesthetic beauty instead of its utility to a story? Is it wrong to do this? Is it right? Is there a middle ground?

Craft Notes / 18 Comments
January 21st, 2010 / 3:52 pm