July 18th, 2011 / 11:38 am
Behind the Scenes

Something I Wrote in 2009

 

I wrote this in 2009. I didn’t fine-tune it. I didn’t submit it. I didn’t blog it. It just sat there. I thought of it fondly. I reread it this morning for the first time in approximately two years, and a lot of it seems to holds true. Here is the unedited version (with yes, Hemingway, the 30s, 40s, 90s, and copious exceptions to this “study” missing):

notes on literary style concerning male protagonists: early-mid 20th century vs. turn of 21st century

– seems like an interesting thing to investigate, have noticed some interesting differences

– in significant works of early-mid 20th century male protagonists seem to uphold certain amounts of confidence, toughness, dominance, even in the face of hardship, emotional experience, or tragedy

– beginning in late 20th century, moving to 21st, male protagonists seem to experience greater awkwardness, greater sense of helplessness and hopelessness, less ambition, less necessity to uphold spirit and status

– looking at early-mid 20th century case study:

  • heart of darkness (1899) – joseph conrad → protagnonist experiences the toils and fears of the dark continent and the death of significant character and has to deliver the news of death, never gives hint of emotional response besides disturbance, moves ‘overall’ confidently and dominatingly through the events of the story
  • the dead (1914) – james joyce → gabriel finds out that his wife will never love him as much as this other man who died in youth, he seems disturbed, but okay with it overall, his revelation displays less emotional response than one should expect
  • great gatsby (1925) – f. scott fitzgerald → gatsby experiences loss of love, something crippling and depressive, however, holds up social status, extravagant lifestyle, doesn’t cry, goes down ‘valiantly’
  • goodbye columbus (1959) – philip roth → neil experiences loss of love, something depressing, wildly offensive based on social status and sexual experimentation, however, takes the thing in as a whole, rational experience, and ‘moves on’ ‘valiantly’
  • revolutionary road (1961) – richard yates → frank leads to the essential suicide of his wife and the dismembering of his family due to his callousness and carelessness, seems kind of sad, but moves on ‘valiantly’ ‘picking up the pieces’
  • seems kind of ridiculous how the male protagonist ‘moves on’ in all of these novels

– looking at turn of 21st century case study:

  • chilly scenes of winter (1976) – ann beattie → pervasive awkwardness, unfulfilledness, depression, desire, helplessness and hopelessness conveyed through the life and tribulations of protagonist charles, character is never able to ‘move on’ or ‘take control’ of life or ‘find happiness’ on his own, he is dependent, perhaps pathetic
  • less than zero (1985) – bret easton ellis → clay fails to have any ambition or sense of direction, he lacks an ability to take control and make sense of things, he lacks ‘morals’ and has trouble controlling depression/emotions, he cries
  • norwegian wood (1987) – haruki murakami → watanabe fails to make sense of his life, sexuality, sense of self, emotional connections to women, aimlessly dependent on emotions and sex, stuck in head, possibly ‘pathetic’
  • everything is illuminated (2002) – jonathon safran foer → all three male protagonists experience a touching and intense journey, filled with emotion, introspection, love, leads to suicide of alex’s grandfather because he cannot handle the emotions and internal disturbances associated with his past, extremely emotional book/experience
  • eeeee eee eeee (2006) – tao lin → pervasive awkwardness, lack of confidence, depression, desire, unfulfilledness, and open-endedness concerning andrew’s life, goals, experiences, overall sense of helplessness

– possible theories for variances in the actions/emotions/mindsets/approaches for the male protagonist which drastically have changed in a relatively short aesthetic time period:

  • absence of military draft weakening sense of ‘strong powerful dominating man’
  • improvements in technology creating sense of alienation, dependence, disillusionment
  • absence of physical labor weakening physical and psychological libido and overall sense of ‘strength’ and ‘manhood’
  • absence of ‘trying to impress father’ or ‘living for family honor’ or something
  • active, rather than passive, displays of emotional via miranda july’s ‘new man’ theory from ‘the shared patio’
  • advancements in female status/feminism
    • i.e. in the beginning of the 20th century, there were few major female writers and these females writers who were major focused on females protagonists and experiences, while today there are more or less equal amounts of major female and major male writers, and females writers have even focused on male protagonists in stories and novels, perhaps this ‘second outlook’ has ‘degenitalized’ and ‘humanized’ the male protagonist in literature, taking away from the overall sense of ‘gallantness’ formerly associate with the male protagonist

– this whole idea seems insane

– why does this even matter

– the male protagonist is hilarious

– am i displaying something ‘overall’ about the male character in writing these notes

Wasn’t that fun?

It’s Monday, dude. Frankie says relax.

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10 Comments

  1. M. Kitchell

      “- why does this even matter”

  2. bartleby_taco

      I think this is pretty interesting/funny!

  3. Tummler

      I like it. Perhaps the transition from modernism to postmodernism would also have some sort of effect on this. Nice job, David.

  4. deadgod

      seems kind of ridiculous how the male protagonist ‘moves on’ in all of these books

      seems kind of ridiculous to think so

      do you still think this ‘moving on’ happens in these particular books

      the “possible theories” are interesting; I think that they have older histories than ‘late 20th c/turn of 21st c’, and that especially WWI was a tremendous shock to the colonializing/imperial/Enlightenment confidence of modernity

  5. Paul Jessup

      Have you ever read Kurt Vonnegut’s play “Happy Birthday Wanda June?”  It seems to be at the crux of this- about a hippy fighting with a Ernest Hemingway type. Hippy is effem intellectual in touch with his roots, Hemingway type hates him, and then ends up committing suicide.

  6. Paul Jessup

      Have you ever read Kurt Vonnegut’s play “Happy Birthday Wanda June?”  It seems to be at the crux of this- about a hippy fighting with a Ernest Hemingway type. Hippy is effem intellectual in touch with his roots, Hemingway type hates him, and then ends up committing suicide.

  7. M. Kitchell

      i mean the problem with drawing this as a dichotomy is that i hate both ends of the spectrum it precludes the idea that there can be a character that exists in the middle?  machismo is equally annoying as 21st century ennui.

  8. M. Kitchell

      i mean the problem with drawing this as a dichotomy is that i hate both ends of the spectrum it precludes the idea that there can be a character that exists in the middle?  machismo is equally annoying as 21st century ennui.

  9. Evan Hatch

      i would say fishkind is right to some extent but the scope of his analysis is so laser-thin as to be inadmissible imo, and there are copious examples that this defy this trend. kafka, anyone?

  10. MFBomb

      Interesting cursory outline–it’s a starting point and I don’t think you intended it to be anything more than a sketch. Props.

      But to piggyback off Kitchell’s post–what about the “middle?”

      I think you need to look more closely–a lot more closely–at the
      naturalist writers (I don’t see any on your list) because the male
      protagonists in many of these works struggle within the
      dichotomy you present–and these works were written in the
      1890s (during the time you assume the opposite was the norm–that males were “tough” and “dominant”):

      Crane’s “The Red Badge of Courage” (Henry Flemming)

      Dreiser’s “Sister Carrie” (Hustwood)

      Gissing’s “New Grub Street” (Edwin)

      Stevenson’s “Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde” (obvious) (fin de siecle British Gothic, but contains many naturalist elements)

      Wright’s “Native Son” (Bigger) (definitely naturalist, despite the pub date, but also modernist)

      All major, seminal works that seem to complicate your thesis. In fact, I
      would argue that it is the recognition and meta-consideration of a
      “middle” or continuum that is the most prominent feature of the
      20th-21st C American and British male protagonists. Jennifer Fleissner
      has a term for this state–“stuckness in place”….check out her book,
      “Women, Compulsion, and Modernity” (she discusses masculinity quite a
      bit and, really, you can’t discuss gender these days without discussing “both”). Her book is a must read for anyone interested in gender and literature (as well as American literature since Henry James).

      http://www.amazon.com/Women-Compulsion-Modernity-American-Naturalism/dp/0226253104