I’m Not Going To Make It Through This Life. Okay, Never Mind. Do You Like Ice Cream? : 3 Reviews

i am like october when i am dead poems by steve roggenbuck

18pp published by Steve Roggenbuck (2011)

Steve Roggenbuck is not Robert Frost. His poems avoid forests of metaphors. Although they might give you a woody. Roggenbuck’s poems are not pedestrian, but peripatetic. They get you to think, just a little bit, about murder and loss. They also make you look into a night sky and wonder what you had for lunch or what’s on TV. Roggenbuck’s poems hold up dead flowers, then make you leave the room after declaring that that’s all there is. They are rakish, shake a giant rake to scare you, gather dead leaves outside the church of poetry, walk an elephant into that strange part of you called consciousness. Steve Roggenbuck’s poems will choke your dad for your birthday. They don’t care. They will not answer your calls. They are alive with the memories of killers, wonder what they will harvest, then stuff dogs into garbage trucks. These poems are the eraser of two hundred years of American poetry, the shout at the end of a sentence that seeks always a little bit of anarchy, a car on fire. Roggenbuck’s poems are the beginning of a great career.

* * *

The Day Was Warm and Blue poems by Richard Loranger

28pp published by Richard Loranger (2002)

Richard Loranger is gay. He remembers the colors, temperatures of his mornings. Some of these simple memories become poems. Like the twenty-eight poems contained in this book. However, Loranger’s poems are not really contained. Or, if they are, they are contained the same way a sky is contained: warm and blue. But, peculiar. Very, very peculiar. Each poem is a tiny ass-fuck on the same day you kill your boss. Each one is there, with you, because there is nothing else to do. This makes them wonderful. Loranger’s poems are pretty butterflies. They flutter through a room and are closely listened to, but only after they have been eaten. They gather dead leaves outside the church of poetry, put them on a shelf, forget them, maybe. If Loranger had the time he would write these poems upon a wall using his own urine. They are that simple and that marvelous. And who knows? Perhaps he already has. Each of these poems are a little song that drifts by. They are the shadow of an acrobat tumbling in air, a cat in each eye. They are a drink of water after an argument, the mystery of television. Doused in gasoline, simple, lyrical, they want to know who’s in charge, will only listen to the secrets of plants, then wait quietly, to get the names they need to celebrate their small fire. Time has nothing to do with them. I mean, who needs time? These poems keep going on and on, each in their little, magnificent way, all warm and blue.

* * *

Aquarium poems by Ryan W Bradley

26pp published by Thunderclap Press (2010)

Ryan Bradley is straight. He eats lots of spaghetti. He sees pornography everywhere. His poems are a testament to that vision: defiant, sexy, sometimes late for class. It is a teenager’s world. Bombs go off like songs on the radio. And Bradley listens, makes them pretty, finds the wonder in flashing red lights, women falling from the sky, a city on fire. Bradley’s poems attempt to feel things. That is, they are thinking: About the next cigarette, cheerleaders buried under ice, a sudden sensation that slants everything, makes you walk funny. It likes girls, smoke, the Beatles. But best of all, they get depressed in the summer, still believe in the alcoholism of the blues, disguise their social class because these were born poor. Sex and death. It’s all here in these poems. And if you aren’t drunk by page two, you will be by page twenty-six. Drunk and slightly bruised. And touched, lightly. Because Bradley’s hand is light, might even take you far away. Imagine particles, the flash of fireflies, the nakedness of desire—cells rapidly dividing—spread over noodles. These poems are peppered with neighbors singing opera, but Bradley also wants to hear your eyelids closing. He’s sweet. These poems are sweet. All of them, underwater.

– – –

Janey Smith (b. March 30, 1981, Anaheim, California) was born on the same day that President Ronald Reagan was almost assassinated. She likes to think her birth had something to do with it. Janey lives in San Francisco, CA.

Tags: , ,


  1. stephen

      beautiful review, Janey

  2. stephen

      i can only confirm this in the case of the roggenbuck review, but i like how you use the language of the work at hand to create a creative review prose style. sometimes i read reviews with more impressionistic prose styles and the reviewer uses language not of the book at all and maybe gives me no idea what the book is like. so yeah, nice job 

  3. Guestagain

      agree, these reviews are great to read in and of themselves, they service the work with original impressions, but I don’t think Ms. Smith’s birth had anything to do with the attempt on Reagan, I think that was Jodie Foster

  4. Guestagain

      agree, these reviews are great to read in and of themselves, they service the work with original impressions, but I don’t think Ms. Smith’s birth had anything to do with the attempt on Reagan, I think that was Jodie Foster

  5. leapsloth14

      I like Richard Loranger’s look.

  6. Janey Smith

      Yeah, he’s a total fox.

  7. Janey Smith

      Guestagain? You’re probably right. But I can dream can’t I?

  8. steve roggenbuck

      janey thanks so much :)
      also, like stephen, i appreciate the review style a lot

  9. Ryan W. Bradley

      thanks for the beautiful words, janey

  10. Bits & Bobs «

      […] Bradley’s Aquarium was reviewed recently over at HTMLGIANT.  Click on the link to check it out. One of the most fun, colourful projects I’ve ever […]

  11. lauren

      I agree with the Aquarium praise!  Especially lovely are “After the Fire, Before the Burn” (the title alone is gorgeous), the haunting “The Family Dog”, and the alluring “Strippers Don’t Dance to the Beatles”, which makes me want to be underage and dangerous. There’s also greatness in “Social Class Tells Me How to Feel” and “After Reading, I Want to get Drunk”–if you have not read this collection, do it soon. Really.

  12. Richard Loranger

      Yeah well Janey Smith foxes me UP.

      Where the H is that pic from?

  13. Lonely Christopher

      If you have a human in you, you need to read The Day Was Warm and Blue. If you want a poetry to knock you on your rosy ass, get initiated — take the initiative and get Loranger’s book. Also recommended for mammals: Poems for Teeth by Richard Loranger.

      — Lonely Christopher.